'Fake smiles and other stories'

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by kindtosnails, Mar 19, 2007.

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  1. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    Pleasantries, fake smiles and tip-toe-ing tact:
    The treacherous social balancing act.
    Tightrope of lies, mock concern, acting sweet,
    Honestly, no one here could give a shit.​



    ...'here' doesn't mean SF. Just realised how that sounded. Started writing it at work (work in an office), so yeah...
     
  2. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    Pleasantries, fake smiles and tip-toe-ing tact:
    The treacherous social balancing act.
    Tightrope of lies, mock concern, acting sweet,
    Perfectly trained in not giving a shit.








    -Yeah, the last line was so wrong, I was tired, mind was unravelling from pointless work crap...I'd edit it, but I can't, so yeah.
     
  3. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    :hug:

    i really like that. short and concise. it is really good.
     
  4. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like that very much, and your edited version was right on! I also REALLY LIKE your signature!:smile: :smile: Dr Seuss is one of my very favorite authors. Is the sig from OH THE PLACES YOU'LL GO?? (not sure I got that title right...)

    least
     
  5. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    Indeedy it is. :smile:
     
  6. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    You have exquisite taste in reading material!!!:smile: :smile:
     
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