Fall

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by LonelyKid, Aug 19, 2007.

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  1. LonelyKid

    LonelyKid Well-Known Member

    Lost until I find the moment I cant seem to recall
    When's the day that I fell so far from heaven
    So much pain around me
    A cant open my eyes and see

    I no longer have the strength to stand up tall
    I'd need the power of a thousand men
    Lost in myself so much
    I cant be another's crutch

    I find it kinda funny and I find it kinda sad
    The dreams in which I'm flying
    Is when I wish to fall - freefalling

    I look across the ocean to find whats wrong with me
    But I'm stunned to notice a tiny little sea
    Filled with the emotions of a broken me
    That only just long and desire to be free

    I stop to empty it while the ocean roars on
    With my hands I cup it out like a foolish pawn
    While the mighty ocean does roar on
    Evermore until the sun brings the dawn

    I find it kinda funny and I find it kinda sad
    The dreams in which I'm flying
    Is when I wish to fall - freefalling

    While I stagger to empty my little pond
    I'm breaking every family and friendship bond
    The might ocean roars louder every hour
    All I manage to do in its presence is cower

    Never really getting any less deep
    I know this way and I start to weep
    Blooming on the shore is a tiny flower
    Destined to the ocean to be devoured

    I find it kinda funny and I find it kinda sad
    The dreams in which I'm flying
    Is when I wish to fall - freefalling
     
  2. Driretlanii

    Driretlanii Active Member

    Very VERY good! Me likes it a lot!
     
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