Fall

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by pither, Aug 24, 2009.

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  1. pither

    pither Well-Known Member

    I want to stand on the edge of the world
    I want to feel the breath leave me as I fall


    The air whirling all around me - my eyes closed tight

    I'll spread my arms wide and welcome relief
    I'll open to the plunge with a new mind

    The pain will vanish in the bliss of the plummet-


    I'll just fly


    Fly to my final peace.​
     
  2. Confusticated

    Confusticated Well-Known Member

    Hm..
    Thank you for sharing
     
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    It sounds peaceful the fall you have written but i believe in reality it would be full of terror and regret. thanks for the read beautifully written
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Thanks for sharing :)
     
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