Fallen Angel

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by SmilePretty, Aug 7, 2006.

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  1. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    Look at the angel,
    She has lost her wings.
    She has fallen to hell,
    And she no longer sings.

    Broken dreams,
    And shattered wishes.
    Muffeled screams,
    And no more angel kisses.

    Destroyed faith,
    And forgotton love.
    Stolen by a wraith
    From above.

    Silence fills
    The empty space,
    The pain kills
    Her angel face.
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it very much.:smile: You're getting better with every piece you write!!:wink: :smile:


  3. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

  4. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    I like the first part the best, but the whole thing is good :)
  5. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    thank you :hug:
  6. great poem..you should write a book of poems and i will publish it :laugh: :cool:
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