Fallen

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FrainBart, Nov 29, 2012.

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  1. FrainBart

    FrainBart Staff Alumni

    In darkness, hidden, I wait for you,
    watch you moving, talking, breathing
    I whisper out in hopes you'll hear me
    To pull me out the ditch I lay in

    The night creeps closer, drawing nearer
    the rolling fog, gets thicker, quicker...

    I fall a little deeper down
    and slowly, as I begin to dig
    the ditch I'm in becomes a pit
    I whisper again, but you are gone

    The night creeps closer, drawing nearer
    the rolling fog, gets thicker, quicker...
     
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  2. midnightstar

    midnightstar Senior Member

    Oh wow that's good Personunknown :hug:
     
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    I hope that someone real soon recognizes how much fortune he would have to be with you...we all know that here
     
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    WE will help pull you out of that ditch hun hugs
     
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