Falling in your love.

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Element, Feb 16, 2006.

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  1. Element

    Element Member

    Hey, I haven't posted in a while, I've been real busy, but I've been working on some poems, so I'll post them. <3

    Ok, so I didn't come up with a name for this one, and it's real crap, but it's how I feel. <3
    I just wish I were pretty,
    Why can’t it be true?
    My body is full of tears,
    And full of feelings,
    Some about you.
    Why do they go for the attractive girls?
    And ignore the important things,
    So if they are just stupid jerks,
    Why is it that I make a big fuss?
    So I just wish that I were pretty,
    Just for one moment in my life,
    So I could experience what it’s like,
    To be in love.
    This one, I wrote last night when I was meant to be asleep. (Falling in your love.)
    I keep on falling in love with you,
    For my love for you is too strong,
    I search high and low for a solution,
    Before I end up heartbroken.
    You are my only one,
    The one thought which keeps me strong,
    Without it, I am no-one,
    A weak soul,
    Wandering through the world,
    Beyond love.
    I love you,
    why don't you feel the same,
    I feel lost and alone,
    without your love to reassure.
    I literally just wrote this one, it's real short, and real quick. <3
    No more tears,
    No more pain,
    No more trips on this emotional train.
    But it’s all that I’ve got,
    All I can find,
    All the feelings trapped in my soul and my mind.
  2. gothic_spleen

    gothic_spleen Antiquities Friend

    that was a trip down memory lane....good job...good poem
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    beautiful :hug:
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