Falling stars

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Gergin, Oct 19, 2015.

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  1. Gergin

    Gergin Well-Known Member

    Do all stars fall so suddenly?
    Has the spans of my wings impose too much?
    That was an escape attempt
    and is only what I am.

    I seldom shine
    but when I do
    I illuminate
    with intent to fly
    Until my silence
    cuts the sky
    Only for a second.
    I burn the night,
    Then die
    with someones wish on my mind.
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  2. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Oooh. I like this! Beautiful images and tying the falling star to someone else's wish on your mind...Very cool! Thank you for sharing this.
  3. Gergin

    Gergin Well-Known Member

    Thank you, that means a lot to me.
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