Falling...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, Mar 29, 2007.

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  1. Falling


    Just as Eternity rises up,
    so does Hell know no bounds…
    I know
    For I’ve been tumbling headlong
    for an age;
    No depth too deep
    No pain too great
    No crevasse too narrow to escape
    No scream loud enough
    to protest the agony
    of continually falling,
    where my soul touches nothing
    but more bitter
    endless
    blackness


    FAL1
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    You express your feelings of the deepest despair so exquisitely. I only wish you did not feel such deep despair... I would rather that you had no such feelings about which to write than to read your masterpieces of misery.

    love,

    least
     
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