Falling

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  1. hailey_14

    hailey_14 Member

    Falling

    Crushed under the weight of nothing
    Something snaps inside
    Collapsing from the inside out
    Something settles
    Something falls
    Giving up
    You say goodbye
    The only peace you’ll ever feel
    Comes when you are gone

    Desperation pounds in your chest
    Pressure builds
    Out of breath
    Dried of tears
    Helpless

    Claw open your rib cage
    Crimson tears will pour
    Releasing you of all the pain
    Everything you have built inside
    You need to but you cant

    Life is a never ending night
    You will always be trapped in darkness
    Your mind is a battle field
    Fighting yourself everyday
    Until the day you cant fight any more

    Crushed under the weight of nothing
    Something snaps inside
    Collapsing from the inside out
    Something settles
    Something falls
    Giving up
    You say goodbye
    The only peace you’ll ever feel
    Comes when you are gone

    Falling, fighting, fell…
     
  2. The Unforgiven

    The Unforgiven Well-Known Member

    transcendental.... :thumbup:
     
  3. hailey_14

    hailey_14 Member

    Thnx so much! :D
     
  4. In Limbo

    In Limbo Forum Buddy

    Stunning work!
     
  5. hailey_14

    hailey_14 Member

    Thank you, that means so much to me :)
     
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