Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by InnerStrength, Aug 27, 2007.

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  1. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member


    Staring into this makeshift telescope
    I see a corrupt lava heart
    Capable of infinite destruction

    A morose man sighs for no good reason
    Reflecting on past fallouts
    Tearing apart the notion of self-blame

    Digging deep into fleshy soil
    Poignant whips lash out
    To protect an infant core

    The immense power of personal fallouts
    Is now known and transforms into
    A scar kept hidden
    Its significance, though, is worn on his sleeve​
  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    I like this poem. The way your worded it gave it power. It is also emotional and deep. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. If you ever need to talk I am here for you. Just send me a pm and I will get back to you as soon as I get it. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
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