falsely cured

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Null, Feb 11, 2012.

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  1. Null

    Null Well-Known Member

    endless bounds of infestations
    infectious fumes in the void

    pilule slides in to digestion
    hope dawn within

    freed from the parasites
    movement unbounded by sight

    dreams abound in the world surreal
    lands honored in proximity

    sensations adrift in today
    confidence in reality

    solutions arrived in deterioration
    truths dissolved in boundless fear

    peace obtained surreptitiously
    regrets persistent through all time

    so many conquered through dishonesty
    visions realized through distant sight

    misguided attempts beyond the present
    forever guided, destined for abolishment

    creeping black crawls throughout the blood
    deep within the bones

    save me, oh no
    please, save yourself
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  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I love how you ended your poem as it says so much
  3. NotSureAnymore

    NotSureAnymore Well-Known Member

    That's exactly how I feel right now.. thank you.
  4. Null

    Null Well-Known Member

    Thank you so much.
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