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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Rybread, Feb 20, 2010.

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  1. Rybread

    Rybread Member

    Filling the empty
    Faucet drips relentless
    Tired - you reach for the water
    Too cold for the comforter
    Blank states fuel the empty page
    Where written words remain confused in place

    Walls scream for release
    Where the corners edge keeps you
    Staring, drifting, dreaming
    Unbalanced to the chemicals
    Frozen to the falling sun
    Clouds moving within you - from truth

    Hidden skin, the cloth that carries over
    Of what warmth could be
    What cold be held between sun sets
    Stained windows blur you from the outside
    What life passes in piles
    Frosting memory from moments of past

    To know of a place
    Without speech, within walls
    To sleep through the years

    ...To fucked to finish this poem...
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    You have talent try not to stay ffffff to long i love to read the ending
  3. Rybread

    Rybread Member

    Thanks. I will do my best (no promises).
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