Feeling

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by BrokenPieces, Nov 29, 2006.

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  1. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    *Comments please, would be awesome if you can lemme know what you think of this*

    it can only be what it is
    nothing more than what we feel
    feeling of what the unknown can bring

    starts with just one
    ends with two
    what more can we all hope for

    just another way to begin
    just another way to see
    just another way to show you
    i am real.
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it!:smile: My feelings on what makes a good poem: if it expresses how you truly feel and you like it, then it's a good poem! It's very individual - some may like it, some may not. I do!:smile:

    least
     
  3. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    thanks hun...

    i guess you can that was one to a start of a new feelings i have been having lately...
     
  4. Flatliner

    Flatliner Guest

    I think it's good. Very thoughtful.
     
  5. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    thanks FL...

    it means alot to me...

    :hug:
     
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I like it :flowers:
     
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