Final Click

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Julia-C, Feb 25, 2011.

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  1. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    Tonight’s the night
    all will end.
    By the time you read this
    I already sinned.

    Measures taken
    To ensure success.
    A note left behind
    To all I confess.

    One last poetic work
    Before I commit.
    Only one task left
    After I click submit.

  2. In Limbo

    In Limbo Forum Buddy


    I sympathise with you deeply. the George Bernard Shaw quote speaks to me deeply and I have read many of your posts that I empathise with...

    Here if you wanna talk, hope you read this, please PM

    Much love
  3. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    I'm just blowing off steam. I know it's a weird way. Don't worry, I will not do that.
  4. In Limbo

    In Limbo Forum Buddy

    It's not weird at all - glad to know you read this, if you ever want a listener just PM me...

  5. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    I really like the way you worded this! :) hope you're feeling better.
  6. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    Yeah I think I am feeling better.

    Chris and Ben, thank you.
  7. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    This poem took me there...I know what it is like to use my writing to let out some steam...words instead of actions...thanks for sharing, J
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