Final Deed of a Manic Depressive (1st Verse only, so far.)

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  1. Nuri

    Nuri Well-Known Member

    Here's the first verse for a song i'm currently writing named;

    Final Deed of a Manic Depressive

    Verse 1

    Twisted signs of silence flutter before me
    Words of decadence mutter from my mouth
    My mood is firmly progressing due south
    I live submerged in a self-induced fracture
    Time surrounds me with the past and it’s tense
    I look to the future to try and find more sense
    Nothing ever falls onto my side of the fence


    Sadly, it's only the first verse since i've run out of ideas but the song is meant to have 5 verses and ofcourse, a chorus so I've got a bit of writing to do.

    I'll be sure to post the rest of the lyrics when i've finished writing them, if you want me to, ofcourse.
     
  2. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    Melikes, it has potential... would like to see the other verses and chorus too, and maybe even what it sounds like. ^^

    TDM
     
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