Finale

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  1. I release
    I repent
    I give up
    I relent
    Life,
    you’ve taken my will
    and all that’s to fulfill
    and turned it all to dust
    and made me feel like I must
    relinquish all
    as I constantly fall
    into your trap
    of hoping
    wishing
    doing
    all for naught
    For I die
    before your eyes
    as you have planned

    What a cruel trick
    to have made me feel
    that if I tried
    I could be healed…
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Dear FAL1;

    This is the first of your writings that I must say I don't like - don't like the subject and how you've expressed it.:sad: It's too final, it scares me - I truly hope you're just relieving your feelings and expressing anything like 'intent'... you're not, are you??:sad:

    Please tell me this is just an early morning feeling, not a document, please? It gives me an uneasy feeling.

    love,

    least
     
  3. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    Hun are you ok? that scared me, please don't do anything rash hun, please. I am here if you'd like to talk. :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug:
     
  4. I'm sick of trying to cope
    of hanging onto hope
    of holding on for one moment
    in each further one betrayed
    All this pain is making me fade
    into invisibility
    I feel like I disappear
    with this, the end of a year
    of desperation
    with doors closing
    avenues folding in
    one by one,
    more challenges
    than I could have done
    anything with
    even were I whole
    It's stolen my soul
    and I am weary with grief
    beyond belief...
    I'm sick of all the early hours
    waking me with worries
    stealing all my power
    I'm sick of waiting for relief
    sick to death of being betrayed
    by love for life that's been waylaid
    as my will to live
    fades
    and I am helpless...
    And I am sick of all the waste and shame
    all the doubt and pain;
    of trying for nothing
    only to be blamed,
    and being a pawn in a wicked game
    that mocks all that I'd once attained.

    FAL1
     
  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Dear FAL1;

    Please PLEASE don't do anything final, especially NOT when you're feeling so awful. Your judgement is not good when you feel this way, please don't act on these feelings. Please??:sad:

    love and hugs,

    least
     
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