Finally posting my stuff

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by pancake111, Aug 25, 2011.

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  1. pancake111

    pancake111 Well-Known Member

    Some of these started out as songs but are unfinished. The ones that are songs have a * infront of the title. Please comment. Tell me what you like or don't like. Any critique is appreciated

    Coming Around*

    She knows she's got it all,
    At least I hope she does.
    She's got me coming around,
    But can't figure out why.
    Nobody knows me,
    But she really should.
    She's starting to feel like home,
    But she doesn't know

    What am I doing here,
    I've been the same all along.
    It's painless where I'm going
    I only fear the pain of your eyes.
    But you're starting to feel like home
    But you'll never know

    She's trapt behind the wall,
    I've come to know
    She thinks that it's her fault,
    But really I've always known

    I wish id never come here,
    I've only hurt myself
    If I can't ever save myself,
    Then neither can you.
    But you're starting to feel like home

    What am I doing here,
    I know i'll never change,
    Even if it means saving you.
    I'd rather take myself,
    Than fear with you

    A home wasn't ment for me.


    I'll put other ones on another thread.
     
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