flood

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by forlorn, Dec 1, 2008.

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  1. forlorn

    forlorn Staff Alumni

    lonliness like a swirling sea,
    crashes at my shore
    and pours through me.
    Through every vain and artery,
    this lost love is drowning me.
    I'm set a drift on a calmer sea,
    till your vision visits me.
    You flood my mind,
    I can't turn the tide,
    can't run or hide.
    Must reach inside to find,
    the bitterness that twists and binds.
    To finally free my mind.
    You flood my mind,
    your a swirling sea
    that pours through me,
    through every vain and artery.
    This lost love is drowning me.
    my last breath will set me free.
     
  2. aki

    aki Well-Known Member

    wow! amazing poem :)
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Awesome poem!
     
  4. forlorn

    forlorn Staff Alumni

    what is love?
     
  5. mourningseraph

    mourningseraph Well-Known Member

    That was so beautiful!
     
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