Flurried Seas

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by latenightshopping, May 6, 2011.

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  1. latenightshopping

    latenightshopping Banned Member

    Seamless it seems to me,
    the ceaseless and senseless seas
    of superfluity
    of substance and materiality.

    Aboard what train,
    astride what steed,
    can I navigate these wild eddies,
    these intractable doldrums
    of doubts and uncertainties.

    Wondrous and perfect things,
    of darkness and brightness,
    of diaphanous lightness,
    come sail with me amid the breeze,
    some company on such flurried seas.
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    lovely so beautifully written
     
  3. latenightshopping

    latenightshopping Banned Member

    Thanks total, really.
     
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    keep writing okay i love reading your poems
     
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