foolish (maybe trig)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by danni, Feb 29, 2008.

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  1. danni

    danni Chat Buddy

    I wrote this awhile back.

    I would do anything, for you
    I'd never lie to you and that's a fact
    But I'll never forget the way I feel right now.
    I called you my everything,
    I loved you, and I gave you my all
    I thought you were different,
    Not one of those guys who just use there girls.
    Someone who knew how to treat a girl right
    But I was wrong your just like them...
    A peice of crap that only want one thing
    Then you left me because, I didn't do it
    Yet, I was foolish and kept coming back
    For what, the same lies, pain, and hurt again and again.
    You'll never change, Ya'll never do
    I confessed my love over and over again.
    You say you love me to
    And I fall over and over, again and again.
     
  2. psycho8

    psycho8 Well-Known Member

    aww...i really like it :smile:
     
  3. AloneInTheDark

    AloneInTheDark Well-Known Member

    really good poem, obviously the subject matter is never nice in this forum. but keep up the writing, we have something to relate to :smile:
     
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