For Blueberry87

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, Oct 21, 2006.

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  1. I thought your words were more haunting (than triggering)...

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    If thoughts hanging with words together
    are called sentence, paragraph, or poem,
    it is only to those who read them, it is known,
    who inside themselves decide it
    There is no judgement in the world
    can reconcile what is made of words,
    once they enter the heart,
    become part of,
    the art of,
    embracing the mind and soul
    Do not be so humble
    You are no less whole
    Let your words tumble
    head over heel
    Do not feel you stumble
    for your words,
    what they convey
    in their way, and what you feel,
    and where they come from,
    are real…

  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    My Gawd, girl, that's excellent, beautiful, and so expressive!!:smile: I love it, I love it!:smile: :smile: You are remarkably talented, ya know!:wink:


  3. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    thats amazing. and that is a poem lol.

    :biggrin: thanks

    although im a little scared about the "haunting" comment..that not good i take it?
  4. So are your words... and 'haunting' means they strike a deep chord - as they do. Affinity with another's words is not always 'comfortable', but a comfort; Someone else has seen within you. You've shared something valuable, trust that...

  5. Thanks Least - how's your "block" - those words could be for you as well...

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