For Julian

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Ze'ev-Hayalim, Sep 17, 2007.

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  1. empty dirt and ancient stone
    all 'round this hollowed tomb
    eleven seasons, yet nothing grows
    born of accursed barren womb

    a mask of joy deceiving
    tattered cloak that hides my shame
    how i wish to be leaving
    finally put an end to this painful game

    more and more i think of you
    another year, come and gone
    stare into the lake, see all that is true
    because in heaven, i do not belong

    my life gladly be forsworn
    just to see you once again
    loss of my mind, corroded and torn
    to know your smile, open up my veins

    miss you...​
    Last edited: Sep 17, 2007
  2. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    A beautiful piece.


    I sympathize with your pain. I'm genuinely sorry you have to endure it.

    Strong emotions.

    Hang in there.
  3. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    :hug: beautiful. sorry i didnt get to this sooner, you know I'm here for you anytime gabe.
  4. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    gabe honey
    i am so sorry for you loss. They say time heals all wounds but I know the pain never goes away. That piece was beautifully written. It brought a tear to my eye. Please anytime you need to talk don't hesitate to PM me. :hug:
  5. like a shadow dear and close
    he is gone from my sight.
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Lovely poem :hug: I'm sorry for your loss!
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