For Once Just Understand!

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ThornThatNeverHeals, Jul 1, 2011.

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  1. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    Give me life
    but know u waste your time
    all i want- the focus of my existance
    is simply to go

    let me die peacefully,
    ill go without a fight,
    i promise,
    i promise to get go of the light.

    For two years now,
    no two and a half,
    i have tried to let go,
    tried to avoid their wrath.

    When you ask whats wrong,
    dont expect a truthful reason
    Ill smile like ive been fine all along,
    and give an exucuse and quietly keep on

    i try to be normal,
    but when the pain in my mind comes,
    i must pull away from people,
    how i want to be all alone,

    They call me many different things at home,
    many different words indeed,
    but less than half of them
    truely describe me,

    I hope maybe you will find this,
    but wont know who i am,
    dont try to make it better,
    just, please try to understand!
  2. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    does anyone have any ideas to improve the 4th paragraph????
  3. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    gah, this poem is shit. i cant figure out how to lock it, so just pretend that its locked.
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