For the Thrill...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by L108935, Jun 2, 2009.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. L108935

    L108935 Well-Known Member

    The thrill I get with you
    Brighter than a sky's full blue
    More thrilling than the roller coasters we rode
    All the beautiful smiles you showed
    The thrill I'd have to be with you
    Higher than on the coasters we flew
    Just waiting in line, wanting to bail every day
    But if with you, I'd definitely stay
    for the thrill...



    (This poem was written to be simple and about a girl i rode roller coasters with all day on saturday)
     
  2. Samsara

    Samsara Well-Known Member

    This really made me smile :) It's well written, too. You must love her lol...<3
     
  3. L108935

    L108935 Well-Known Member

    I loved her more than anyone ever loved anyone, and it was all due to my mental disorder (borderline personality). :poo:
    Thanks for complimenting my poetry. My poetry best describes me, so complimenting it compliments me most.
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Lovely!!!
     
  5. Remedy

    Remedy Chat & Forum Buddy

    Awww, nice to see a happy poem! :) Paints a cheerful picture.
     
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.