For when it gets to the release methods too...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by In Limbo, Apr 23, 2011.

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  1. In Limbo

    In Limbo Forum Buddy

    Glass of cheap white in hand,
    words stutter from thin laconic finger tips.
    Sips.

    But they stay inside my head.
    Bunched and hunched, curled over.
    Foetal,
    Don't pry
    For once they let me cry.

    An ascerbic connisseur?
    A vain sham, in an empty house.
    Alone with a barren mind.
    Sad
    And uninspired.
     
  2. The Unforgiven

    The Unforgiven Well-Known Member

    if there was a like button, i owuld have clicked it just short of two hundred times. :hug:
     
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    This is so well written, but may I suggest, you try another wine? J
     
  4. In Limbo

    In Limbo Forum Buddy

    Thanks guys...
     
  5. Kathy

    Kathy Well-Known Member

    I really like the way this is written. The varying rhythm and length of lines makes it interesting to read, and the poem definitely potrays the emotion really well :)
     
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