Forest

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by A.SoNiC.boY, Mar 17, 2012.

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  1. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    Shredded, torn and tattered
    I wander though this forest
    Is endless, this path a walk
    Forks come and go, on occasion
    I take them here and there
    Randomly I make my way
    Knowing nothing of the road ahead
    Only that there's no way back
    Mo where to sit and rest my weary mind
    And contemplate on decisions made behind
    How much longer can I walk
    The truth is I don't know
    And I'm not sure I even care
     
  2. scarlettdrknss

    scarlettdrknss Well-Known Member

  3. HollowRhythms

    HollowRhythms Well-Known Member

    HI ben... please know i care? i really like your poem.... short, sweet, nice... but to the point...... :hug:
     
  4. houseofcards

    houseofcards Well-Known Member

    I like this poem a lot, I can relate to it a bit.
     
  5. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    Shredded, torn and tattered
    I wander though this forest
    It's endless, this path I walk
    Forks come and go, on occasion
    I take them here and there
    Randomly I make my way
    Knowing nothing of the road ahead
    Only that there's no way back
    Nowhere to sit and rest my weary mind
    And contemplate on decisions made behind
    How much longer can I walk
    The truth is I don't know
    And I'm not sure I even care

    FIXED THE TYPOS. >.<
     
  6. Freya

    Freya Loves SF Staff Member ADMIN

    Makes me wanna give you a cuddle :/ :hug:
    I care.
    I also like the poem - very evocative.
    xxx
     
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