Freakshow

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Butterfly, Nov 15, 2011.

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  1. Butterfly

    Butterfly Pokémon Master Staff Alumni SF Author SF Supporter

    Backed into a corner,
    Tired and all alone.
    Why don't you just listen?
    And get down off your throne!

    I try and try again,
    But yet again I fall.
    I crawl on my hands and knees
    I'm at your beck and call.

    Just a slave in your system,
    A number on your screen.
    Are you just cold hearted?
    Did I make you mean?

    I want the pain to stop.
    I want the moods to go.
    Sorry you are blind to,
    My life, my freakshow.
     
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    This is exactly what someone and I are talking about in a PM...it hurts so much and i am so sorry you have to experience this too
     
  3. Butterfly

    Butterfly Pokémon Master Staff Alumni SF Author SF Supporter

    It sucks. The ones we rely on to help and treat us should do just that but often they fail us.
     
  4. pancake111

    pancake111 Well-Known Member

    I love this one, especially the first and last verses! Very very good.
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I like this one, great work honey. :)
     
  6. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    I could "hear" this as a song as I read it. It's very powerful with that inherent rhythm to it. Hope you feel better than this soon. :hug:
     
  7. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Wow hun so powerful it says so much
     
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