'Free"

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, May 17, 2007.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Its dark over here
    Will you come see me?
    The faces I wear
    The freedom I seek
    Im not really here
    You're not really free
    Life's never fair
    Now stop following...
    You cannot sow
    What you didn't reap
    You cannot sell
    What you may not keep
    The bars be the boundaries
    That keep you from me
    The bars are the borders
    Binding me free.


    ~C
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Another work of art! Curtius, you're a genius with language!:smile:
     
  3. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    "The bars are the borders
    Binding me free."

    Hah, so true. Often times, other people express my thoughts even better than myself.
     
  4. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    There are thousands of ways to twist my words...

    twist them for yourselves and read what you need to see, that is what makes poetry so great!


    ~C
     
  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    you are a poetic genius!!:smile:
     
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