Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by fweeps, Jun 19, 2009.

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  1. fweeps

    fweeps Staff Alumni

    Freedom is just a word
    one that I have never heard
    for I myself am stuck in a prison
    that leaves me cut with a deep incision

    The wall around me is oh so high
    it is implanted there till I die
    it will not fall
    not even when I call

    for it now stands
    held by my minds strong hands

    You know, I wasn't born with it
    it seemed to grow bit by bit
    all the trust that I let stray
    was broken in a steady way

    So I've given up, stopped trying
    and now I must be slowly dying
    for all the pain has taken it's toll
    and I cannot trust a human soul

  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug: Maria!

    Deep poem,I like it :)

    I hope you don't stop trying though!
  3. *sparkle*

    *sparkle* Staff Alumni

    Maria :hug: thats a good poem and i can see the pain in your words :( lots of :hug: s
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