Freefall (3)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Lilly, Feb 15, 2011.

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  1. Lilly

    Lilly Well-Known Member

    {wow, i gotta say, this is like the pure definition of freefall haha even i agree this could use a LOT of editing, it has like...a rap beat...noo not rap lol}

    So now I lay me down to sleep
    I pray the Lord my soul to keep
    I will die before I wake
    I pray the Lord my soul to take

    Wait here, wait a minute
    I still have a soul?
    then Why am I here, in the dark all alone?
    Praying to something and I get no reply
    all I wanna know really, is why
    Why if i have a soul am i like this
    these thoughts in my head
    Im the one that they wont miss
    yea when im dead, when im finally gone
    will there be a heaven or are all of us wrong?
    do i get peace, when im deep in the ground?
    will i get to sleep then?
    shh dont make a sound.
    i heard something coming from the coffins closed door
    it opened..
    see a light
    and it dont hurt anymore.
  2. The Unforgiven

    The Unforgiven Well-Known Member

    That's exactly what I wanted to read hun... It's making me cry and I never cry.. =')
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