Friendship

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Hellfrost, May 30, 2011.

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  1. Hellfrost

    Hellfrost Well-Known Member

    I wrote this just now for a friend. I debated editing it, I know there are several errors in it and that I can make it a lot better then what it is at the moment but I would rather go for the raw emotion that is behind each word then the slick unnatural feeling of edited speech.

    You know who you are. :)

    Friendship.

    Words left unspoken will bring tears to the dead
    But a bond left unbroken will remain instead
    I need nothing from you but to be your friend
    To be the embrace that comforts and an ear to lend

    I hold you close as you let it all out
    Never judging, no need to be proud
    Friendship is an unbreakable vow
    No matter the pain my affection for you won’t cow

    Through these words I hope to convey my sympathy
    To be a brick in a sea of pain and misery
    A light to bring you back from the brink of starkness
    To help you face the demons that hide in your darkness

    I hold you close as you let it all out
    Never judging, no need to be proud
    Friendship is an unbreakable vow
    No matter the pain my affection for you won’t cow

    No word that you say will ever fall on deaf ears
    I will stand beside you throughout the years
    Until one day the shadow will lift and you will see
    That you forever had a friend in me

    I hold you close as you let it all out
    Never judging, no need to be proud

    Friendship is an unbreakable vow
    No matter the pain my affection for you won’t cow
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    your friend is so lucky to have such loyalty hugs
     
  3. Hellfrost

    Hellfrost Well-Known Member

    Thanks. I just hope that my friend liked it as well ^^
     
  4. Moat

    Moat Banned Member

    I think it is perfect as is.
    Whoever this friend of yours is, they are damn lucky to have someone like you to care as you do.
    :bubbles: :bubbles: :bubbles:
     
  5. lancashirelass

    lancashirelass Well-Known Member

    That is lovely and i agree with leif it's perfect as it is. Hugs
     
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