From the outside in

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Mordeci, Aug 5, 2009.

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  1. Mordeci

    Mordeci Banned Member

    (Not sure how I feel about this one yet)

    The voices rise up in unison,
    They call for a new beginning,
    They scream for a new start,
    They desire for the end of all things,

    The watchmen look down from their tower
    They see the beginning of the end,
    They see the faults of men,
    They see total destruction,

    The children stand on the street,
    They look up to the towers heights,
    They don’t understand what has happened,
    They don’t know what to do,

    The streets are desolate,
    The powers that rule have fallen,
    The voices of change have been silenced,
    The beginning is the end is the beginning.
  2. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    It's powerful. I like the "visual" effect of each line starting with "The..."
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like this poem creates emotion fear almost well written
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Brilliant! :heart:
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