Fuck you very much

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  1. dark.streets

    dark.streets Member

    You see me here, broken and bleeding,
    You hear me now, desperatley pleading,
    You know you kill me, you dont care,
    I'm stuck in this Hell because you put me here.
    I've held on to this for way too long,
    You'll never understand why I feel this strong.

    Fuck you very much,
    You ruined my broken life.
    You can't blame me for living on the edge of a knife.
    Fuck you so very much.
    Look to yourself if you want to blame.
    As I walk away into freedom,
    I'll purify this house in flame.

    Living sin, sinful life,
    Don't remind me of all the strife
    You put me through every day.
    Don't think you have a say,
    This is my life, my world, my eyes,
    I will not subject myself to your lies.

    Fuck you very much.
    You only think you can control me,
    You only think I can't live without you.
    I have never felt so free.
    Fuck you so very much.
    I don't regret what I have done
    Because I have given up living to die
    For living for the thrill of the run.
  2. sammakko

    sammakko Banned Member

    Thank you again dark.streets

    it real was their life, their world and their eyes, no any words from others. Especially no loved ones.

    I have to remember that and it will help me.
    Your poems are so helpfull on my case.

    Shame I cannot help back.
  3. dark.streets

    dark.streets Member

    You do. Just by telling me that my work inspires you motivates me to keep writing. That is what writers love to hear. I'd rather have that than anything else.
  4. PerfectlyMurdered

    PerfectlyMurdered Well-Known Member

    Wow, I like your poem a lot. I relate to some of the things you say, you did a great job. :cool:
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