Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Dec 30, 2006.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Lashing out
    Each whip it draws
    Slashing out
    Leathered claws
    Trying anything you can
    Thinking you can play a game
    Get over yourself you spoiled man
    For you are only just a name
    This beast cannot be lured you see
    Just dealing with itself is war
    There's nothing new you can do to me
    That I've not done to myself before
    Now get on with your life my dear
    Whats done is done
    Whats gone is past
    This 'fish' will make it loud and clear
    Your lure cannot be cast!

  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Incredibly excellent, as are all your writings!:eek:hmy: I really like this one.:smile:


  3. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    I hate it when I am being provoked.

    One will never fight harder than when cornered. It only gives me more to push against.

    and thankyou Least. ;-)

  4. gentlelady

    gentlelady Staff Alumni

    This writing is wonderful as always, but left me feeling ill at ease. Hmmm.
  5. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Thats good then - I got my point across.

    I would say take it in context tho - my writings are usually very raw and never very gentle. Someday I like to think my words will calm.

  6. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    I really like this one as well. :hug:

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