Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Aug 10, 2007.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Watch them walk along
    Passers by uncareing
    More concerned with who is looking
    At the clothes that they are wearing.

    Futile, all the things we do
    Stupid points we try to make
    Waste the time we bully thru
    Wasting life because it breaks.

    Always unexpected
    Startled sheep
    They sit afflicted
    Victims of their vanity
    Chaos now their sanity...

    Seek refuge in your chapels
    Seek peace thru innocense
    But its looking for that faith in things
    That caused your ignorance.

    Pray for balance
    Search for home
    Look everywhere and then
    Remeber that your faith must come
    From strength you have within

    A single strike creates it
    The heat of light that makes it
    Thats all it takes for the glass that breaks
    Around the heart that fakes it...

  2. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    This is extremely well-written and powerful.

    I adore the message behind it.
  3. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    Thank you so much for sharing another one of your poems with us. I am happy to see you posting them again. I have missed reading your poems. I loved this poem. It is deep and it has emotion in it. It is also very powerful. I loved the poem because I was able to also read between the lines and get the message behind it. I hope that you share more with us. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
  4. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Absolutely beautiful Curtius! As always are your works. Your unique way of putting words together only adds to the message within the words. You're a genius. Keep posting them. I look forward to reading your poems.

    love, least xoxo
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Fab poem :) :hug:
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