god and all that

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Lentil Illness, Jun 23, 2008.

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  1. Lentil Illness

    Lentil Illness Well-Known Member

    last night I
    prayed to

    for the urge
    the desire
    the will
    to carry on

    but the
    I gave
    was sacrilegious

    I died a death
    and He did not
    forgive us
  2. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    This is very clever and well done! :smile:
  3. nagisa

    nagisa Chat & Forum Buddy Staff Alumni

    I like this poem. Thank you for sharing. :hug:
  4. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    LIke all your poems, this one is very good. I can identify with the way you put your feelings into words. You take the words right out of my mouth (when they won't come out on their own).
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