Golden Moon

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Witty_Sarcasm, Mar 10, 2016.

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  1. Witty_Sarcasm

    Witty_Sarcasm Writer, Musician, Fun Lover, Magic Maker

    This is from 8th grade or so, right around the time I started writing poetry.

    The golden moon I see at night
    I wonder why it shines so bright
    Hung up there in the starry black twilight,
    Sings its songs in the night

    So big, so bright, so mystical
    So round, so strange, so magical
    So weird, so golden, so unexplainable
    So nice, so comforting, so beautiful

    You may wish upon a star
    So distant, so very far
    But I enjoy wishing upon a golden moon
    Then I know my wish will come true soon

    The golden moon watches you at night
    Way up there in the starry black twilight
    It watches you sleeping all night long
    So shine, golden moon, keep carrying on
     
  2. ThePhantomLady

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    Beautiful poem!
     
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  3. Witty_Sarcasm

    Witty_Sarcasm Writer, Musician, Fun Lover, Magic Maker

    Thanks so much :)
     
  4. some_random_name

    some_random_name Well-Known Member

    Golden Moon, what a fitting and nice title to a pretty poem.
     
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  5. Witty_Sarcasm

    Witty_Sarcasm Writer, Musician, Fun Lover, Magic Maker

    Aww thanks :)
     
  6. AdamTide

    AdamTide Well-Known Member

    That was great ! And that applies to you too. YOU keep carrying on. You should write more and put it on here. It can help people. You obviously put time and caring into that and it showed. Very well done ! :)
     
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  7. Witty_Sarcasm

    Witty_Sarcasm Writer, Musician, Fun Lover, Magic Maker

    Thank you, I will be sure to post more of my work. Glad you like it!
     
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