Goodbye

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Descendant, Mar 21, 2012.

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  1. Descendant

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    This is the end
    I can't go on
    Following the death trend
    My will to live is gone

    I just can't believe
    I'm leaving like this
    Now all I want to know
    Is will I be missed?

    I lye here thinking
    Cold steel against my head
    Will everyone go on ticking
    Once I am dead

    Will the Earth still go round
    Will people remember me
    Once I'm in the ground
    Or will they forget to see

    How once I lived
    How I existed in this hell
    And how I loved to give
    Or maybe they just couldn't tell

    Because I said so little
    I stuck to the shadows
    Now they won't notice me
    Hanging from from the gallows

    I wish I could stay
    That I didn't want to die
    Now it pains me to say
    This is the end, good-bye

    Hope you guys like this one.
     
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  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    It has such a negative ending hun it says what many of us feel inside
     
  3. Descendant

    Descendant Account Closed

    I think a lot of people can relate to this poem. I try not to write just for myself but for everyone who feels the same way I do.
     
  4. Witty_Sarcasm

    Witty_Sarcasm Writer, Musician, Fun Lover, Magic Maker

    Glad to read another of your poems. I can really relate to this one.
     
  5. Descendant

    Descendant Account Closed

    Thanks Witty, I really need to get on writing some new material.
     
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