Got bored

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by JM18, Oct 27, 2009.

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  1. JM18

    JM18 Active Member

    Things of black and things of white,
    like pieces on a chessboard.
    We never can get things quite right,
    we are not equal - you are my lord.

    Without a cause, but with effect,
    you toy with me each day.
    For a reason i cannot detect,
    it has to be this way.

    The day I tire and I shall flee,
    for you have wore me out.
    That'll be the last you'll see of me.
    And you'll regret, i have no doupt.

    Until that day I'll be your slave.
    Submit to your cruel will.
    but lest' you change your evil ways,
    You'll soon have broke my will.
     
  2. Aurora Gory Alice

    Aurora Gory Alice Well-Known Member

    That was a cool poem JM, I'm guessing you were religious but are no longer? Massive assumption but it sounded like a poem about somebody losing their faith in God.
     
  3. JM18

    JM18 Active Member

    I believe in some sort of " higher power " but i choose not to call it a name... nor do i pray to it..

    Never have been religious though
     
  4. chickidee

    chickidee Member

    i really liked how this poem just seemed to roll off my tongue as I spoke it out loud. I dont know, but i liked it.
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Great poem :)
     
  6. Is This It

    Is This It Well-Known Member

    I like it:smile: its good
     
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