grains of sand

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by forlorn, Dec 1, 2008.

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  1. forlorn

    forlorn Staff Alumni

    Time isn't on my side,
    no matter how I try.
    You can't slow it down.
    You can't turn it round.
    Time it's like grains of sand,
    falling through my hands.
    You can't slow it down,
    you cant turn it round.
    Life, just to be alive
    you've got to love it now,
    live it somehow.
    Life, to stand the test of time,
    to live not just be alive.
    I want to feel this way,
    each and every day
    of my life, of my time,
    to live not just be alive.
     
  2. forlorn

    forlorn Staff Alumni

    yeah Jim whatever:blink:
     
  3. Anju

    Anju Well-Known Member

    So true...I like it :)
     
  4. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    I like the rhythm you've achieved as well as how you've said things. :smile:
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I love it :)
     
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