Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Terry, Feb 8, 2008.

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  1. Terry

    Terry Antiquities Friend Staff Alumni

    Sunrise lights the sky
    And I mourn.
    Questions rise of why
    And I mourn.
    Days drift in nothingness
    And I mourn.
    Nights in hopelessness
    And I mourn.
    I mourn that you are gone.
    I mourn the life lost.
    I pass from two to one
    And quietly count the cost
    And I mourn.
  2. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    I hope that this all eventually pass and regardless of you saying you don't want to find love again, I still hope you do....

    specially with Johnny Depp :hug: :biggrin:
  3. danni

    danni Chat Buddy

    :hug: terry
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

  5. I love that... I love your repetition, as of that of a shadow that follows you always. It's so very, very sad - and inspite of its seeming simplicity - so well expressed, and effective. I think it could reach almost anyone - all those who have experienced deep grief - and that is a rare gift...
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