Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by amicrazy, Sep 10, 2008.

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  1. amicrazy

    amicrazy Well-Known Member

    Some old Haiku's of mine, starting with my favorite:

    Roommates piss me off
    Next time that they close their eyes
    Stab them with a knife

    Drive out to Doral
    Ninety-nine bullets fired
    One left for my head

    Inside I scream out
    From the outside I cut in
    Trying to escape

    Feel the gentile breeze
    Sitting under the palm trees
    Living in a dream

    Gazing at the trees
    Sun shine passing through the leaves
    Lights my perfect scene

    Listen to the rain
    Sounds of sadness flood my mind
    Insides scream with pain

    Need to numb the pain
    Happiness flows through my veins
    Live a Life of Shame

    Give him all your cash
    Shovel poison up your nose,
    Soon you’re gunna crash
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Great poem hun :hug:
  3. Datsik

    Datsik Forum Buddy

    I really loved the ones in bold.

    Not saying that the others are bad, but the ones in bold are the ones I loved.

    Keep up the great work.

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