Haikus

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by sonicbella, Nov 1, 2008.

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  1. sonicbella

    sonicbella New Member

    My ex and I would write haikus throughout the day and text them to each other.. I thought I'd post the one I wrote today here.

    I often breathe in..
    A tendency, a habit.
    I wish it would stop.

    Sometimes I hold it,
    wait until my lungs feel raw
    and then I give in.

    I renew life, air.
    This life is my blank canvas.
    I will paint it black.
     
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    awesome!
     
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