Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by pit, Jun 14, 2010.

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  1. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    A little of you goes a long, long way
    and a lot goes more than a lot.
    You're not rainfall collecting in my dish for a week,
    you're the dew on my rose
    on the block.

    I've missed you four days out of a week,
    sometimes even more than five.
    Must I ration you out like nectar
    to nourish each cell
    in my hive?

    I know that's the state of our union;
    Two vines on a trellis unwound.
    But to go without your kiss and embrace
    Makes a hornet
    out of a hound.
  2. absolution

    absolution Forum Buddy

    I really like this! :hamtaro: Good job :) keep writing
  3. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

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