Halls of Eternity

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by InnerStrength, Aug 9, 2007.

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  1. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    “Halls of Eternity”

    Drifting away into surreal dreams
    I feel as if I am already in
    The Halls of Eternity
    A labyrinthine place
    Where mindless souls reign

    Lying in a torpid state
    I can smell rot and must
    Of all things dead
    Completely obliterating any sense of freedom

    Before my mind shifts to
    That black world of dreamless wells
    One thought pushes through the fog

    What is left for a corrupt man except
    to enter the Halls of Eternity
  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    Wow I loved the poem. I like the way you wrote it and the way you worded it. It also has feeling in it and I can relate to what your saying. I hope that you decide to post more poems. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
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