Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Ze'ev-Hayalim, Sep 6, 2006.
all these things i am
I apologize for posting this piece of crap. I dont have any muse when it comes to poetry
T'was NOT a piece of crap, though smartass - some of us (even writers) had to look up some of the words you used! They make sense, once I find their meaning, but do not fit you. You are not hated. The illusion is yours! Then of course, I have many of my own, and feel lost just as you. Your words were succinct, of your expression, even if the meaning needed to be sought out.
Powerful for so short an expedition....truly
Invidious indeed! Pishah!!!!
I agree with FAL1. It was powerful, but so not what you are. I only wish you could see yourself as many of us view you.So many positives I cannot even begin to list them here. Take care hun. :hug:
PS -- keep forgetting to mention how much I love your wolf/dog avatars, and how you keep changing them. And how you express through these images the love within the pack - which you also find here - hunted, haunted, looked upon with disdain from outside, but loved from within the circle of the judged. We are one.