havent posted for a while...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by thedeafmusician, Jul 27, 2007.

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  1. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    its been ages....and ages... and ages... and i still havent posted. i dont like anything i write lol. in fact, i dun really like this poem much either... but here you go anyway:




    she bled confidence only to make others smile

    they wouldn't be smiling if they knew her
    they wouldn't
    forgive
    the red flowing like a leaking tap
    or those white raised lines

    they don't know her
    they only know the confidence (fake confidence)

    they don't know all the second guessing
    every time she took a step
    or made a choice

    but she lived to please

    and so she lied to please
    subtle lies
    they didn't notice it (she didnt either)

    until one day, they saw her arms

    ...she wore makeup for a reason


    TDM
     
  2. Spearmint

    Spearmint Well-Known Member

    :eek:hmy: That's really good.
     
  3. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    TDM,
    I agree with That One Girl this poem is really good. I am sorry that you haven't posted in a while and that you do not really like this poem. I think that it is deep and emotional. A lot of people I know are just now stopping to fake confidence and actually are confident. It took me a while to make them see things that they themselves didn't see. Sweetheart if you ever need to talk send me a pm and I will get back to you as soon as I get it. Take care sweetie and remember I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss


    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
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