He lifted the Veil

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by carol2237, Mar 16, 2008.

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  1. carol2237

    carol2237 Guest

    He lifted the veil
    To her bright shining face
    The happy smile, teary eyes
    This must be a dream
    He doesn't deserve her
    Or so he thinks
    Her soft touch brings him back
    From that daydream
    Into reality, the truth
    He was married today
    Wedding bells chiming
    Rice is flying
    As the couple walk to the car
    Ready to start their lives together
    As he opens the hotel room door
    He opens his eyes
    To find himself alone
    In his cold dark room

  2. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    :smile: that was really good. i didnt expect the ending
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