Hear fear.

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  1. Hellfrost

    Hellfrost Well-Known Member

    You search for love but you cannot see
    light faded away, you lost your priority
    searching land and shore for what is perfect
    only to end up broken and defect.

    Why can't you see I am here?
    You act so brave but I see your fear
    commitment and love you postpone
    fear of ending old and alone.

    I tried to pave your path with gold
    every time I try to call you fold
    take my hand, upon a journey we embark
    let me guide you through the cold dark

    Why can't you see I am here?
    You act so brave but I see your fear
    commitment and love you postpone
    fear of ending old and alone.

    embracing love but with every step you fall
    unwilling to take help you stand tall
    but I can see the loneliness that haunts
    I can see the dark thoughts that taunt

    I scream your name but you don’t hear
    Light faded away, you tremble and fear

    I scream your name and I fear
    Light has faded and left you
    Nothing left to hear.
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    WoW hun another great poem way to go
     
  3. lancashirelass

    lancashirelass Well-Known Member

    wow that is another poweful poem that you can picture as you read. Look forward to the next one :hug:
     
  4. Hellfrost

    Hellfrost Well-Known Member

    Thanks, I feel like this one isnt my best work though. Now reading it I see a lot of things I could have written better...
     
  5. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Hun i would love to see your best work You do such a wonderful way with words they speak mountains hugs
     
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