Heart of Gold

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by shatteredsoul, Feb 13, 2006.

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  1. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    She has a heart of gold

    So kind and gentle

    So soft and warm

    Comforting and allowing

    Comes from her

    But you do not see the other side

    You do not see how she cries

    The anger and pain

    That subsides inside

    The fear of being hurt

    She’s so confident

    So beautiful

    Self-esteem is not on her side

    She looks in the mirror

    And runs to hide

    She loves many people,

    Many things

    But the things she hates

    Is what’s inside
     
  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    that was so good...I loved it!

    BP
     
  3. Dead_Alive

    Dead_Alive Guest

    You have a natural talent to write... and reading your poems have been a delight!
     
  4. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    wow! thanx..tahts probably the best compliement ihave ever received about my poems!
     
  5. Dead_Alive

    Dead_Alive Guest

    You should keep them... there are places you can go to get them published. I had one published and was honored in Washington DC at a world conference of other poets.

    You have talent... this is more than art... it is a window of your soul!
     
  6. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    i dont even know how to go about getting stuffpublished..plus...my stuff isnt that good!
     
  7. That one is good hun! HAven't read you others - will make sure I do so tomorrow!

    Love
    Sarah
     
  8. Dead_Alive

    Dead_Alive Guest

    go to www.trafford.com/1731 Then download the children's book publishing guide. Understand it covers all types of publishing but this is a good place to go to understand the process and get started.
     
  9. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    I love reading your poems... that one in particular... I can relate to it so well.

    TDM
     
  10. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    awesome :heart:
     
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